You paid for a one-month English language course at a college oversea but you cannot attend write a letter to the college administrator. In the letter:
Introduce yourself and give details of the course
Explain why you are unable to attend the course
say what you would like to do
Dear Sir/Mam,
I am writing to request my withdrawal from the English language course for international migrants.
I am currently working as a Software Developer and having more than six years of experience. Although I know English at a basic level, my new job in the country requires me to have at least intermediate proficiency. The English language course that I applied for will provide sufficient course material to qualify.
Earlier this week, unfortunately, I have received an email stating that the position is no longer needed by the client, so they deferred my joining. Because I am no longer traveling to the US, I would not be able to enroll myself.
I would request to you to reverse the fees which I have deposited in full at the time of booking. However, if there are any deductions, you could let me know. I am attaching my bank details to this letter.
I hope you will consider my request at the earliest convenience.
Yours Faithfully,
Apoorva Chikara
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 823.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92814371257 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91532528501 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.658682634731 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.6969556548 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.8181818182 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1818181818 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.27272727273 4.34317383033 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198736710088 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0724166126577 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687171308514 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115852178036 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0619026486322 0.0580467560999 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.72 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.