You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play with you at the weekend. You decide to write to him in hospital, telling him about the match.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
• Tell him which team won
• Describe the conditions on the day
• Say how you felt about the match
Dear Fred,
I hope you are recovering fast and getting well at hospital after your accident last week! I`m writing to give you some highlights about our planned match on last week end.
We had organized a football match against the main team of our university over the week end. When we decided to organize that match, we could not expect to win it. The other team was well trained and just won the university`s league; however, we made it and won the match at the end with a high score. The referee was mutual and in same distance from both teams.
The weather was rainy, but the stadium was well maintained for such sever condition. Many people came to attend the match, although that heavy rains. As well a lot of spectators were supporting our team to win, and that made our team very enthusiastic to make them happy.
Once the match finished, we were so relieved with the positive result. It was my first time to play against well-trained team such as University`s team. The match was very stressful, but I did not feel that all my efforts were in vain. I felt proudly of my self to complete the full match in support of my team.
Best wishes,
Ayoub
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nd in same distance from both teams. The weather was rainy, but the stadium was ...
^^^
Line 9, column 248, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...that all my efforts were in vain. I felt proudly of my self to complete the full ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, so, thus, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 979.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6179245283 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53559125908 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608490566038 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4871226514 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.3076923077 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3076923077 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.38461538462 4.34317383033 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236631368409 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0726637996136 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0779913418371 0.0603063233224 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153403872181 0.12726935374 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0937469736658 0.0580467560999 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.22 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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