You recently had an issue with water leaking at your rental property. Write a letter to your landlord to complain about the problem and say
– When did it happen?
– Describe the problem.
– Suggest what could be done about it.
Dear Mr. John,
I am writing to bring to your attention a leakage problem with my kitchen tap at flat number 20 in your owned building on North Road.
My annual vacation was due, therefore I traveled out of the city for almost one month. When I returned home last week, I have noticed a heavily water drops from my kitchen tap. I ensured before my leave to close the main water service connection, but the leakage has occurred.
I have two main taps in the kitchen, and only one which is for the washing machine was leaking. I could only assume that its connection with the machine`s hose became loose; however it was newly assembled. Either its make is size is incorrect or the water pressure was too high to sustain the connection.
I have comprehensive maintenance contract with your company, and my contract states that all damaged items are covered. I would therefore ask that you report the problem to the maintenance department, and that you request them to come and replace it at soon as possible.
I look forward to the problem being resolved.
Yours sincerely,
Ayoub
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 135, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('heavily') instead an adjective, or a noun ('water') instead of another adjective.
...returned home last week, I have noticed a heavily water drops from my kitchen tap. I ensured b...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 187, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ter drops from my kitchen tap. I ensured before my leave to close the main water ...
^^
Line 7, column 97, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...is for the washing machine was leaking. I could only assume that its connection w...
^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... and replace it at soon as possible. I look forward to the problem being resol...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, look, so, therefore, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 914.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81052631579 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61417402198 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657894736842 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4101974636 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0909090909 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2727272727 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.63636363636 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189974643573 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0703577578419 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052058310455 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10776583782 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533524078529 0.0580467560999 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.