You recently had an issue with water leaking at your rental property. Write a letter to your landlord to complain about the problem and say– When did it happen?– Describe the problem.– Suggest what could be done about it.

Essay topics:

You recently had an issue with water leaking at your rental property. Write a letter to your landlord to complain about the problem and say
– When did it happen?
– Describe the problem.
– Suggest what could be done about it.

Dear Jonas,

I am writing this letter to complain about a water leaking problem in the kitchenette of your house, that you have given me on rent.

As I have stayed in this house for the last couple of months and never faced a problem of water leakage. it was last sunday when I was cleaning my kitchen, I observed a few droplets of water. As it was a sunday and I have a holiday, I was planning to clean the house.

The problem is so severe that all my utensils and items in the wardrobe of the kitchen are damaged. The water is leaking from the above flat and caused a catastrophic situation.

I have reached out to members of society and shared all the information about this problem. they have asked to get a signed copy of the complain, post which they will take the action against the person who is responsible.

I appreciate a revert from your by end of this friday, so the repair work can be started.

Yours Sincerely,
PK

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 106, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...never faced a problem of water leakage. it was last sunday when I was cleaning my ...
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Line 6, column 203, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...rved a few droplets of water. As it was a sunday and I have a holiday, I was planning to...
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Line 10, column 93, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...all the information about this problem. they have asked to get a signed copy of the ...
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Line 10, column 133, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...they have asked to get a signed copy of the complain, post which they will take the action a...
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Line 12, column 14, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...son who is responsible. I appreciate a revert from your by end of this friday, so the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 776.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.43428571429 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45512209265 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594285714286 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.1404729274 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.6 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.2 4.34317383033 5% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217353027245 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0841266211592 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077424406785 0.0603063233224 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122760265589 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0978449577184 0.0580467560999 169% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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