You recently had an issue with water leaking at your rental property. Write a letter to your landlord to complain about the problem and say– When did it happen?– Describe the problem.– Suggest what could be done about it.

Dear Mr. Joseph,

I am writing in reference to the inconvenience I am encountering for the last couple of days due to the leakage of the lavatory water supply. I am badly needed immediate attention of you in that issue.

As you know, severe gusts and squalls owing to cyclone 'Fani' leave the coastal area a wreaked havoc. Unfortunately, our residential area, Cox's Bazar Model City, has suffered the most. To make the matter worse, our building and adjacent to have affected the most. As a consequence, the overhead tank, which is located just on the rooftop of the washroom of my master-bed is leaking continuously and there are several other visible seepages as well. Owing to that, the washroom is almost always remained wet and slippery. On top of that, if it remains unrepaired, it might cause a severe collapse of the complete utility system.

Therefore, I would like to request you to take an urgent step to resolve the issue as early as possible to minimize the risk of further damage. If you permit, I would call our regular plumber to fix it and will adjust the bill with the rent of next month.

I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely,

A T M Jakir Alam

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, therefore, well, you know, on top of that

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 32.9175257732 43% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 786.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82208588957 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7534327389 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.699386503067 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8537752689 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.3333333333 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1111111111 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11111111111 4.34317383033 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0785612811412 0.216113520407 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.030045616566 0.0766984524023 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0292415157427 0.0603063233224 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0399571899765 0.12726935374 31% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0159965616843 0.0580467560999 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 7.59969072165 123% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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