You’re interested in a music course that you saw on an advertisement. Write a letter to the club.
In your letter, you should:
• explain why you’re interested
• request more information about the course
• talk about your past experiences.
To whom it may concern,
My name is Truong Nguyen. I am writing this letter regarding the advanced orchestra course at the Grand Music Academy.
I happened to know about the music class two weeks ago in a television advertisement. It immediately got my attention as there were six well-known musicians endorsing the course. Moreover, a wide range of musical instruments is available for students to choose from. Personally, I have been searching for a cello class for months without success. Therefore, I am very interested in taking part in your course.
There is some information that I would like to know. I am currently residing in district 3 so will there be any class in district 1 office available? Also, please give me details about the total fee and the maximum number of students in one class.
As for my experience, I have been self-practicing cello for 3 years since high school. At the moment, I think I am at the intermediate level. I hope to attend your music course to improve my cello skill.
I look forward to receiving your response.
Best regards,
Truong
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, may, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, well, as for, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 909.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88709677419 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90450489545 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.645161290323 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.2916028036 44.8134815571 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 60.6 76.5299724578 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.4 16.8248392259 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.93333333333 4.34317383033 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127482883343 0.216113520407 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.041464324727 0.0766984524023 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492010207506 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0598375821763 0.12726935374 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358230731761 0.0580467560999 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.19 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.