Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction regarding a particular store advertisement that was published on 18th December edition. Let me elaborate the situation to you. It has been mentioned that there is 50% discount in the home appliances selected at Croma lifestyles Ltd. However when we visited the store located at Greenways Roads, Chennai, the discount seems to be void. In-spite of showing the newspaper announcement, the billing person informed that there are no discount applicable for the home appliances and the details given for the products are false
Based on the discounted price given, we had carried the amount and when we came to know the truth, we were taken aback. How can an advertisement published in front-page go untrue? Request you to take immediate action and address this issue at the earliest. I would like you to provide compensation amount for the false and obsolete marketing failing to which may consequence a legal action against your newspaper company. Looking for a positive response.
Yours faithfully,
Zara
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 277, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...ances selected at Croma lifestyles Ltd. However when we visited the store located at Gr...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, may, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 900.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26315789474 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95446097334 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.695906432749 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 81.0767537584 44.8134815571 181% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.7 4.34317383033 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208684083658 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0715551272341 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055869412277 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164506109197 0.12726935374 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0148995578245 0.0580467560999 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 8.37731958763 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 8.71597938144 148% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 7.59969072165 122% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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