You received a letter form an airline company for your feedback for your latest flight with them. Write a letter to the Customer Service Manager
• Say what reasons made you choose this airline.
• Something that you liked about the flight
• Suggest an improvement
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to you about my last trip to Malaysia which i had flown through your flight. It was one of fruitful memory in my life. The reason being saying that, the crew of your flight AK208 was just amazing. They are really very carrying and polite with the passengers. I would like to share with you on the reason I have chosen your plane is Departure on time and variety of food. Especially indian cousin.
On top of that, The luggage cabin in your flight is more placeable and easy to lock by touching the small switch at the right corner of passenger seat. Moreover, The foot space in your flight is comparatively the best in airlines which are operating in this route.
But, I am honestly tell you that, The lighting system was terrible. As my journey was on night, I was expecting the peaceful and painless sleep. Since the reflection of midnight light was too bad, my sleeping was not as much i expected. So, I recommend you to change the lights and install the eye free lights.
Hoping that my request will be consider by you and the next trip with your flight will be smoother.
Yours Sincerly,
Thiru.M
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to you about my...
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...ou about my last trip to Malaysia which i had flown through your flight. It was o...
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...ines which are operating in this route. But, I am honestly tell you that, The li...
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... in this route. But, I am honestly tell you that, The lighting system was terri...
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...as too bad, my sleeping was not as much i expected. So, I recommend you to change...
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...ht will be smoother. Yours Sincerly, Thiru.M
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, honestly, if, moreover, really, so, as to, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.48453608247 200% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 944.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53846153846 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31976011308 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6399941593 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.4285714286 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8571428571 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 4.34317383033 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263149605235 0.216113520407 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0850259290254 0.0766984524023 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748869730522 0.0603063233224 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15449576278 0.12726935374 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.082642493729 0.0580467560999 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.46 8.71597938144 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.