I have attended a meeting in your hotel Queen Elizabeth in Montreal. Unfortunately, I had to forget some confidential business reports in my Lounge. I am hoping you assist me to found it.
Actually I stayed in the hotel from 24 of September to 26 September in room no. 417 to attend a business conference. On the morning of the 27th of September, I depart from Quebec. After reached in London I realized that I have lapsed to take essential documents from the hotel room. I am not sure where I left perhaps, it will in inside of drawer which beside the couch. All the documents are placed under a yellow folder named written as Jessica Desai.
Further, This document is very essential for my Next presentation. It contains Confidential Financial report, Bank statements, minutes, a phenomenon about launching a product in the next Press conference. In fact, I Have to submit to the Head office of Next week. Without this document, I have to face up with business crises and troublesome.
I would request you Please instruct your staff as soon as possible and hold these documents n your possession. Please Give a phone call at 123132323 when you received it. I will tell to my secretary to attain this document from your hotel.
I Look forward to hearing from you. Thank you in advance for your concern.
pawanchopra
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 91, Rule ID: HAD_VBP[1]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'forgotten'.
Suggestion: forgotten
...abeth in Montreal. Unfortunately, I had forget some confidential business reports in m...
^^^^^^
Line 1, column 91, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'forgotten'.
Suggestion: forgotten
...abeth in Montreal. Unfortunately, I had forget some confidential business reports in m...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 84, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eptember to 26 September in room no. 417 to attend a business conference. On the...
^^
Line 3, column 182, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...27th of September, I depart for Quebec. After reached in London I realized that I hav...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 148, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n. Please Give a phone call at 123132323 when you received it. I will tell to my...
^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Pawanchopra
...Thank you in advance for your concern. pawanchopra
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, look, so, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1082.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 227.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76651982379 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79772795762 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629955947137 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 332.1 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.6018292003 44.8134815571 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 60.1111111111 76.5299724578 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.6111111111 16.8248392259 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 4.34317383033 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234923281436 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700151955533 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0714003568381 0.0603063233224 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123002942979 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0983696162247 0.0580467560999 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.5 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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