Many countries aim to improve their standard of living by economic development, but some important social values are lost as a result. Do you think the advantages of economic development outweigh the disadvantages?
In the era of globalization, where economic development has enhanced the living standard of entire mankind; however, there are many who perceive that it is a major reason for the weakening of ethical and moral values of the people towards society. Let's give a glance on upsides and downsides of economic development in the subsequent paragraphs.
Certainly, it is true the fact that the reason for the improved standard of living in the economic development of the country. health and education are major elements that make it happen. develop sources of health care lead to rejuvenating life’s expectancy rate by providing the best treatment to severe disease. For instance, queen elizabeth care in Canada offers specialized treatment with the help latest technology to the citizen of the country. Otherhand, queen elizabeth University of Toronto conducts the research and discovery to find the advanced area of medical science. Beside, the progressive standard of education facilitates specialized in diverse skills and professions. it helps to upbring a rational citizen and symbolize peace and prosperity in the nation.
Every coin has two facets one. Despite all the advantages of economic development, there are also some disadvantages too. some people criticize that it also undermines social values. since economic growth directly associates the long working hours of the workforce. Owing to this reason, parents are not paying proper attention to their children and they addicted to the toxin. they are maybe involved in anti-social activities. For instance, the children of Albertans are under the influence of criminal activities since their parents have no spare time love and care.
In Nutshell, I perceive that although it is born to ignorance in terms of improper childcare yet in the bright side economic of the development has a major contribution to healthcare education which means a lot for the developed nation rather than its dark side.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, for instance, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1679.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43365695793 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91464151445 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576051779935 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.6452604439 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.7647058824 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1764705882 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.35294117647 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244092723752 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0685343267945 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.078343464699 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134853600806 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0520870992907 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.