You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.Write a letter to the manager of the hotel.1- Say where you think you left the papers.2- Explain why they are so important3- Tell

Essay topics:

You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.

Write a letter to the manager of the hotel.

1- Say where you think you left the papers.
2- Explain why they are so important
3- Tell the manager what you want him/her to do.

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to inform you that I have forgotten some important papers during my recent visit to your reputable hotel.

The papers must have been left in the room where we had our business meeting. I could only assume that it either was dropped beneath the table or had been covered under the table sheet. My suitcase had many files, but it did not include those files. Papers are still in the meeting room, and it is the only suggestion.

I do not have another copy from those papers and it was original, therefore, it is so important. It will be very difficult for me to issue those papers again from the local authorities. The procedure itself of issuing again only one original paper may take two consecutive months.

The booking reference number of that meeting is WDCRX, and I would request if you could be able to help me find those important documents. You can use the available security cameras at the meeting room and retrieve their footage during the meeting. We could know what exactly had happened.

I look forward to receiving my papers as soon as possible.

Yours faithfully,

Ayoub

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 218, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...orities. The procedure itself of issuing again only one original paper may take t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, may, so, still, therefore

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 941.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75252525253 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40900620311 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.0454232837 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.3846153846 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2307692308 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.07692307692 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216769856487 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0632730019831 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685953236671 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115684566685 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0914592840785 0.0580467560999 158% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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