You recently bought a piece of equipment for your kitchen but it did not work. You phoned the shop but no action was taken.
Write a letter to the shop manager. In your letter
- describe the problem with the equipment
- explain what happened when you phoned the shop
- say what you would like the manager to do.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to show my dissatisfaction with the product I had purchased from your store last Sunday in mega sale.
It is a 1000 mh battery Mahindra Juicer in white body. Very next day when I initiated making juice, at first it had not started. Moreover after juggling with its startup I managed to make it function, it produced a loud enormous noise and damaged my socket.
I called your store to arrange for its repair, the receptionist simply hanged up on me saying that there is no technician available currently.
Being this product is faulty and is under warranty period too, I want you to immediately provide me with a new working equipment in exchange of this. Also, I want an additional warranty for 6 months as a compensation of my damage.
I anticipate your timely response .
Thanking you,
Yours Sincerely,
Chhavi Arora
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to show my diss...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...ing juice, at first it had not started. Moreover after juggling with its startup I manag...
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Line 8, column 106, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[5]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'new working equipment'.
Suggestion: new working equipment
...want you to immediately provide me with a new working equipment in exchange of this. Also, I want an ad...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ge. I anticipate your timely response . Thanking you, Yours Sincerely, Chh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 732.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 151.0 206.0 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84768211921 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77774969207 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.748344370861 0.622605031667 120% => OK
syllable_count: 228.6 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3832912616 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.3333333333 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7777777778 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.77777777778 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201098127372 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713850287725 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531971557324 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0834352855195 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0278919647762 0.0580467560999 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 7.59969072165 124% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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