Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.
Some people think sharing substantial amount of information in scientific research, business and education is good. other are of opinion that not every information can be shared freely with anyone.
To start with, there are many platforms available which can ask for information both personal and general. Many people support this idea to share much information with them in order to prevent any bad consequence. For instance, If someone is going to volunteer in lab study for possible viruses check, one should render all the information including genetic history, details of any comorbidity and contact details too. same goes with the academic records. As the information given in academic record of a child will be available every time in need of any emergency during school hours.
On the other hand, with the advent of technology, cyber crime rate is on rise. there are plethora of social websites which get rather personal information to use it either for illegal actions in one's name or to gain access to financial accounts linked with the same details.For instance despite of free trial of BMI calculator being advertised over social platform, provider may ask user to add their permanent account number to subscribe before recieving result of BMI calculation and entice user to cancel subscription anytime during the trial period can get access to their bank accounts and rob them of their hard-earned money.
To sum up, sharing information to anybody can be quite dangerous as we never know whether the information being shared by us is in the right hands or not.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ny comorbidity and contact details too. same goes with the academic records. As the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, for instance, to start with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1320.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09652509653 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68118294204 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629343629344 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 139.045352314 49.4020404114 281% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 132.0 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294282098738 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132679252101 0.084324248473 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111006088954 0.0667982634062 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21646717931 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.145933856422 0.056905535591 256% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.