You recently broke your leg and your colleagues from work sent you get well cards and presents. Write a letter to them and say
– Thank them for supporting you.
– Describe how you spend your time.
– Explain about your recovery process.
Dear peter and john,
Hello! I hope things are fine with you. I’m just writing to say Thanks for your gifts as well as well cards and also, explain the process of my treatment as well as daily program during the period of rest.
Some daily activities are offering by my physician’s such as walking every day and go to the physiotherapy. I wake up soon at 6.00 and after taking a shower, have breakfast usually at 8.00AM every morning, then I have to walk for 1 hours. Also, I should go to the physiotherapy three times a week. I like watching TV a lot, therefore, I spend more time of the evening for this work. Meeting friends and light sports such as chess and swimming are other daily programs that almost fill my daily time.
My doctor is hopeful which I can come back to office very soon because the process of my treatment is very good. I have three physiotherapy meeting, and after that I would take MRI photo and show to the doctor. If he verify my leg healthy, I think, I’ll be beck to office maximum in ten days.
Once again, I should thanks for all of your kinds.
Hope to see you soon,
Mostafa
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 92, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'as well'.
Suggestion: as well
...st writing to say Thanks for your gifts as well as well cards and also, explain the process of ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 218, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'verifies'.
Suggestion: verifies
...MRI photo and show to the doctor. If he verify my leg healthy, I think, I'll be b...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then, therefore, well, i think, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 946.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52631578947 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45034943585 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631578947368 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9627252182 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.8333333333 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4166666667 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41666666667 4.34317383033 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187961285338 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0658870063664 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718688616176 0.0603063233224 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110652392603 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0988629005429 0.0580467560999 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.9 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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