You recently did a short course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course.Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letterDescribe what you enjoyed about the courseSay how much cooking you have done since th

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You recently did a short course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course.

Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter

Describe what you enjoyed about the course

Say how much cooking you have done since the course

Suggest another cookery course you’d like the school to offer.

Dear Sir or Madam,

The impetus behind writing this letter is to appreciate the efforts you made at your school to teach students. Three months back, I had attended your cookery school to get some expertise in culinary art. Although the duration was only six weeks, I got the opportunity to learn how to cook international cuisines. Your teaching methodology is really commendable, particularly the fusion you do with various spices is exceptional.

When I left the school, I took admission in Masters in restaurant management. Along with the study, I am also doing a part-time job at a local Chinese restaurant, where I work as an assistant to the chief. In the supervision of the chief, I cook many Chinese dishes, and I am gradually getting hands-on Chinese food.

I would like to suggest that your school should also offer baking classes. During my summer vacation, I would like to join your institute to get to know how to cook different cakes, pizzas. I believe that there many things that I should learn about baking to get a job in any five-star hotel.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,

Sara Khan

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Average: 8.9 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 314, Rule ID: YOUR[1]
Message: Did you mean 'you're' or 'you are'?
Suggestion: You're; You are
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, really, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 963.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93846153846 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74579829631 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651282051282 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.1907293418 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.25 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.25 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.16666666667 4.34317383033 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243615966943 0.216113520407 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0819090385295 0.0766984524023 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555367384309 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128983364982 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0819606915192 0.0580467560999 141% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 8.71597938144 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.