You recently had your computer fixed at a local computer store. However, you are not pleased with the service which you received.
Write a letter to the store manager.
In the letter,
-Describe the situation.
-Explain why you are dissatisfied
-Say what you want the manager to do.
Dear Sir,
Hope you are doing well. I am writing to you in reference to convey my dissatisfaction at a repair job to fix my computer which I received from your store. Let me explain the situation.
To elucidate the Apple mac book which I recently bought from your store was having charging problems from the day one. Firstly I tried to ignore the issue but later on I found that without the charging cable the laptop battery backup would last only for a few minutes so I took the laptop to your computer store and I was promised a resolution to the technical issue within a day. I was told by the technical staff that the battery was faulty and would be replaced free of cost as the laptop was covered under warranty. it has been a week since the computer has been repaired and the laptop is again showing the same problem which is irritating as it is hampering my preparation of exams as they are due next week.
Thus I would request you to provide a replacement of this laptop as it was bought from your last month.
I look forward to your immediate response and resolution.
Yours sincerely
Ben
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 521, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
... the laptop was covered under warranty. it has been a week since the computer has ...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
... of exams as they are due next week. Thus I would request you to provide a replac...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, look, so, thus, well, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.48453608247 187% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 906.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 203.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46305418719 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49139361623 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586206896552 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 283.5 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.6386447458 44.8134815571 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.6 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3 16.8248392259 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 4.34317383033 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206510359002 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0855800063172 0.0766984524023 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699854528371 0.0603063233224 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137451550742 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112385261577 0.0580467560999 194% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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