You recently moved to a new house and you want to invite an old friend to stay with you.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
* invite him to stay and suggest a date
* briefly describe the new house and garden
* say why you like your new house
Dear Jimmy,
I am writing to let you know that I have recently moved to a new house and I would love for you to come over and spend a few days with me.
There is a long weekend coming in the third week of September and this would be a good time for us to catch-up and spend time together in my
new home. You should plan to come on Friday, 20th September evening straight after work and we can have fun during the weekend together, and we can leave for work together in the morning on Sunday, 22nd September.
The new house is really lovely and I am so happy with the location and layout of the house. It has 4 bedrooms, with one bedroom conveniently
located on the ground floor, especially handy for elderly visitors and 3 big bedrooms on the first floor. The house is located in a nice part
of the city and offers amazing views of the forest behind. I have a beautiful garden in the back with a vegetable patch where I am already growing some nice organic vegetables. The garden also has a barbecue area with a patio next to it. I have also set up a couple of hammocks to lie down and enjoy the view and the weather.
I really am loving the new house as it fits all my wish list of requirements, with enough storage space, plenty of fresh sunlight in all the rooms,
a dream kitchen with built-in cabinets with all appliances and a lovely sit down deck at the back to sit and enjoy my cup of coffee every morning.
I am so excited to have you over and look forward to seeing you on 20th September and spending time together in my new home.
Love,
Michelle
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 141, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ave fun during the weekend together, and we can leave for work together in the mo...
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Line 9, column 142, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oor. The house is located in a nice part of the city and offers amazing views of ...
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Line 12, column 10, Rule ID: AM_I[1]
Message: Did you mean 'am I'?
Suggestion: am I
...y the view and the weather. I really am loving the new house as it fits all my ...
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Line 12, column 10, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...y the view and the weather. I really am loving the new house as it fits all my wish li...
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Line 15, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...njoy my cup of coffee every morning. I am so excited to have you over and look...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, really, so, third, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 5.05154639175 317% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 26.3917525773 201% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1283.0 937.175257732 137% => OK
No of words: 301.0 206.0 146% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.26245847176 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 3.78020617076 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27091418743 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 127.690721649 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528239202658 0.622605031667 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 396.9 290.88556701 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 16.3608247423 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.0048307488 44.8134815571 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.636363636 76.5299724578 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3636363636 16.8248392259 163% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54545454545 4.34317383033 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.29896907216 209% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200102317661 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0738536733584 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0775847900826 0.0603063233224 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0950185066604 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0842420997131 0.0580467560999 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 8.37731958763 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.45 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.72 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 8.62886597938 197% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 8.54432989691 150% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.