You recently read an article in a newspaper about your childhood friend with whom you have lost contact for a long time.
Write a letter to the editor. In your letter.
Say which edition and when did the article appear
Explain why you lost contact with your friend.
Say how you want them to help you to get back in touch.
Dear Sir,
Greetings for the day!
I am Amanpreet Kaur, a resident of Patiala, Punjab, a regular reader of your newspaper, The Tribune, and through this letter, I want to obtain the contact information about one of my childhood friends. About whom you have published in your newspaper.
Kindly allow me to elaborate on this matter. Recently I read an article, which was written by one of your journal about the young artist on last Monday, When I saw this, I felt jubilant because the young artist was my childhood friend, with whom I lost contact ten years ago.
As his father was serving in the Indian Army due to this, he and his family shifted immediately from this city, after getting the transfer orders of his father. Further, I tried to get his new address details from our school, but they did not have any information available regarding his new address.
Could you please provide me, his contact details? If it is against your protocols, then could you share my contact number, which is 01134666 to him. If you help me through this, then it would be king gesture of you.
Looking forward to positive revert.
Yours faithfully,
Amanpreet Kaur
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, regarding, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 975.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85074626866 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45363934413 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661691542289 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.3822776812 44.8134815571 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6363636364 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2727272727 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.72727272727 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305476706002 0.216113520407 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115079626089 0.0766984524023 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0977617530302 0.0603063233224 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1241306713 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106538310762 0.0580467560999 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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