You recently read an article in a newspaper about your childhood friend with whom you have lost contact for a long time.Write a letter to the editor. In your letter.Say which edition and when did the article appearExplain why you lost contact with your fr

Essay topics:

You recently read an article in a newspaper about your childhood friend with whom you have lost contact for a long time.

Write a letter to the editor. In your letter.

Say which edition and when did the article appear

Explain why you lost contact with your friend.

Say how you want them to help you to get back in touch.

Dear Sir,

I am writing to inquire some information about an article that has been published in your magazine. Regarding to the last version, which is broadcasted on 20th July, a text which is about a businesswoman who is rendering her relentless service to the society.

Honestly, she is one of my close friends whom I missed for the ages. Since, she migrated to another country (Canada), I could not able to get in touch with her. In the yesteryears, we used to share only letters where after some point of time, all my posts were returned because of the incorrect address. I got to know her location from her biography though.

Your fascinating newspaper helped me to find out her and it would be grateful if you could send me her complete contact details. If it against your protocols, then please intimate her about me by ringing to my personal mobile number (8870643750).

Waiting for a positive revert from you.

Yours sincerely,

Teena

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: YOUR[1]
Message: Did you mean 'you're' or 'you are'?
Suggestion: You're; You are
...r location from her biography though. Your fascinating newspaper helped me to find...
^^^^
Line 13, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ert from you. Yours sincerely, Teena
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
honestly, if, regarding, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 792.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 164.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82926829268 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6741263647 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.725609756098 0.622605031667 117% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2522831767 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.2 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3 4.34317383033 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224938788641 0.216113520407 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0809888651502 0.0766984524023 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469590542096 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117984764394 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0267004372824 0.0580467560999 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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