You recently read an article in a newspaper about your childhood friend with whom you have lost contact for a long time.Write a letter to the editor. In your letter.Say which edition and when did the article appearExplain why you lost contact with your fr

Essay topics:

You recently read an article in a newspaper about your childhood friend with whom you have lost contact for a long time.

Write a letter to the editor. In your letter.

Say which edition and when did the article appear

Explain why you lost contact with your friend.

Say how you want them to help you to get back in touch

Dear Sir,

Greetings for the day!

I am Teena, a resident of karakpur, Punjab and I am a regular reader of your Newspaper, the Hindu. Through this letter, I would like to obtain the contact details of one of my childhood friends about whom you have published in your article.

Kindly allow me to elaborate on this matter. Last week, there was an article of a young artist by one of your journals and I felt jubilant when I saw this as he is my childhood affable friend with whom I lost my contact a few years ago.

His father was working in our Indian Army and evacuated immediately from their native as soon as he received his offer letter in hand. I enquired for his new address in my school, but no fortune.

It would be grateful if you could share his mobile number with me. Else share mine – 8870643750 with him, if it’s against your protocols. Its time for you to prove your king gesture.

Looking forward for a positive revert.

Yours faithfully,

Teena.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 814.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5988700565 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41858065446 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.689265536723 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6411649496 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.0 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0909090909 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.54545454545 4.34317383033 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357586150386 0.216113520407 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115778564941 0.0766984524023 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0962502697188 0.0603063233224 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135572222268 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100844333279 0.0580467560999 174% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

---------------------
Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.