You ride a bicycle to work, but there is a problem with the parking. Write a letter to the building manger to provide bicycle parking.
In your letter, you should:
• why you ride a bicycle to work
• what the problem is with the parking
• what your suggest are.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to bring to your kind attention regarding the problems I am facing while parking my bicycle.
I am residing about only 3 kilometers near to the vicinity of my office area. So, for commuting, I use my bicycle in order to save fuel as well I am much concerned about the effect of greenhouse gases emission on earth. Further, for eco-friendly reasons, my cycle plays a significant role.
By the time I reach the office, either the parking is already filled with Four wheelers or by some trespassers. Last week, when I parked my cycle in front of the park, it was towed by the traffic police and after so many follow-ups and fine, I got my cycle back.
I request you to provide some additional parking facility for the cycle riders in order to save our nature.
Your swift salvage to scrutiny the reputation of your parking facility will help to regain employees’ faith.
Thank you for the consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Tom
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, so, well, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 815.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79411764706 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76042221333 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.658823529412 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4410424579 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.5 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.7 4.34317383033 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166779230921 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652402257963 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438438547195 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0873770062515 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369529948711 0.0580467560999 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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