Some people think that children should be studying all the mandatory subjects until the age of ten, while others believe they should have an option to select favourite subjects to study. What is your opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your experience.
It is considered by some that kids must read all the mandate subjects till the grade V, while other people think that they should be given a choice of their preferred subjects. In my opinion, I believe that all the compulsory subjects must be taught to the children as it’s the learning phase of their life.
On the one hand, in today’s competitive world, there is no technology without the intrusion of major related subject fields like mathematics and science. To exemplify, either in the profession of engineering, aerobics especially medicine, one cannot excel without studying it in their early stages of school life. Further, a seed to interest in the above fields will only emerge if only they are introduced as a mandatory subject in kid’s mind. For instance, A recent survey conducted in United states revealed that children learnt science below the age of 10 are excelling in NASA more.
On the other hand, kids are flying butterflies and should be let free based on their own selection of subjects. Almost all the kids have their most close to heart subjects like drawing, music and so on. If they are given an opportunity to explore them aggressively, then they will convert all their breakdowns as breakthroughs which will in turn result in enhancing the nation’s pride. In addition, it will help them to shine in that field of their career paths and enable them to reach greater heights. An apt illustration is my cousin who is serving as a well-known journalist in one of the reputed articles and has been recently awarded with the Oscar award for her enduring service.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that mandate subjects under the age of ten plays a vital role in shaping child’s career growth in order to reach the pinnacle as well it greatly serves as a benefit to our nation’s laurels .
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 233, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...s a benefit to our nation's laurels .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, well, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1534.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91666666667 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76611639897 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589743589744 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.5695651056 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.833333333 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.83333333333 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239964039615 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0846581818792 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674797912953 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146263442479 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0814334942294 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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