Some people think that children should be studying all the mandatory subjects until the age of ten, while others believe they should have an option to select favourite subjects to study. What is your opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your experience.
Nowadays schools are seeking the ways to make children more interested and involved in their studies using different methods. Although it is considered that we should allow children under age of 10 to choose which course to study, I have a firm belief that all subjects should be taught at such an early age and no options should be given.
Firstly, educational institutions, as well as schools, prepare children for future. At the tender age of ten and under it is usually impossible to predict what life holds for you. I believe elementary school years is the right time to understand the basics of the world and learn little bit of everything. For example, if I was allowed to choose my subjects when I was eight, I doubt I would have chosen boring maths, despite the fact that fundamental knowledge of mathematics is essential in everyday life of any adult.
Secondly, since it is often complicated for schoolchildren to make the right decisions, they tend to be influences by other people. For instance, in many scenarios a kid is more likely to choose a subject recommended by their parents or attended by their peers than the one which interests them the most. As a consequence, it nullifies the advantages of giving them an option to choose the disciplines. This is because at such tender age we don't or maybe even shouldn't understand the importance of decision-making.
In conclusion, due to the reasons stated in my essays, I believe that at no circumstances kids below age of ten should be allowed to select course to learn, but should study all subjects in curriculum.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 281, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
...stand the basics of the world and learn little bit of everything. For example, if I was al...
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Line 3, column 405, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to bore'.
Suggestion: to bore
... was eight, I doubt I would have chosen boring maths, despite the fact that fundamenta...
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Line 5, column 442, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
.... This is because at such tender age we dont or maybe even shouldnt understand the i...
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Line 5, column 461, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: shouldn't
...t such tender age we dont or maybe even shouldnt understand the importance of decision-m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1318.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84558823529 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89984749331 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580882352941 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6892310659 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.818181818 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7272727273 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311324284166 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100059500914 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0894013268729 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194570702425 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0761318110362 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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