You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job.
Write a letter to this friend.
In your letter:
say why he/she would not enjoy going to college
explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her
suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/he
Dear Ritu,
I am writing this letter in response to your correspondence wherein you have asked my advice in choosing your path. I think you should opt for a job and start your career.
To be honest, I do not recommend you to get into further studies as nowadays, other that theoretical concepts, nothing else is discussed, not even the application of the concepts. Moreover, the syllabus contents are not sync with the industry requirements. Eventually, you will start finding the whole academics monotonous with no value addition.
You are already a graduate now and people of your age have started earning. You possess a good business acumen and the basic skills to take up an office or admin profile. As you are a fresher, you can start looking for entry level or junior profiles. Considering your personality, the skill sets and qualification, you may go for any of the sectors like retail, insurance, hospitality and banking. In the course of employment, you can learn extra skills such as problem solving, team management and critical thinking.
I shall pen down hoping that my suggestions will help you take the correct decision.
Yours Truly,
Navpreet
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, may, moreover, so, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 987.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08762886598 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83805370566 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.685567010309 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 297.9 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2998311273 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.25 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1666666667 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221760454426 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0774192953283 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640234411079 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128787731443 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.097287390774 0.0580467560999 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 8.71597938144 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 7.59969072165 120% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 41.2886597938 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.