he friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He / She has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
1. why you think your friend would enjoy a camping.
2. Describe some possible disadvantages.
3. Say whether you would like to go camping with your friend.
Dear Priya,
I am elated to receive your epistle after a long time and feel honored that you are seeking my advice regarding your camping holiday this summer.
You are a traveler and love to do adventure sports. Camping was the only left in your bucket list as far as I remember. Isn’t it? Without a second thought, you must go foritas such an experience will not only leave you with lot of exciting memories but also the enjoyment in meeting new people. I would suggest Nainital for camping this summer because firstly, it is not very far from your home town and secondly, it is cleaner as compared to few others in the radius of 180-200 kilometers.
Every coin has two sides and camping is not an exception. You need to be careful and cautious of the wild animals which roam in the woods especially at night for hunting. This is not too often but still a pro-active approach will be appreciated. Also, you may feel dizzy owing to atmospheric pressure and lack of oxygen so be prepared for this as well. I would like to volunteer myself to accompany you to Nainital as it happens to be my favourite spot for camping and I want to avail myself of this opportunity.
I hope my letter will help you in deciding and please revert me with other details to book our camp. I am thrilled already to have fun.
Yours truly,
Navpreet
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 429, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...r home town and secondly, it is cleaner as compared to few others in the radius of...
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Line 5, column 441, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...and secondly, it is cleaner as compared to few others in the radius of 180-200 kil...
^^
Line 9, column 102, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...me with other details to book our camp. I am thrilled already to have fun. You...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, still, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1105.0 937.175257732 118% => OK
No of words: 243.0 206.0 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54732510288 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4308415905 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 127.690721649 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62962962963 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 290.88556701 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.1915455911 44.8134815571 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6923076923 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84615384615 4.34317383033 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301066141647 0.216113520407 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0911180541849 0.0766984524023 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0832173930015 0.0603063233224 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173276077471 0.12726935374 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0895051934627 0.0580467560999 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.