You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or try to get a job.You think he/she should get a job.
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter
>say why she/he would not enjoy going to college.
>explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her
>suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her
Dear Monika,
I am writing this letter to advice you that you should take up a job instead of further studies. Please find my reasoning below.
First of all, congratulations to you as you have completed the MS by Research in computer visions. According to me there are two main negative aspects of doing a PhD as compared to going for a job. First reason is the amount of time you would spend during the PhD. Whereas, the second reason is the quality of job that you get after PhD would be almost the same as MS candidate, since your field of study is very popular and demanding in current technology market sector.
Benefits of taking up a job would facilitate you with real time project experience and save a good amount of money that would also help you grow in future.
As you are technically very strong and expert in your area of study, I would recommend you to get a job of researcher in a reputed organization.
I would be happy to help you, if you have any further concerns.
Yours Faithfully,
Ashita
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 100, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...the MS by Research in computer visions. According to me there are two main negative aspects of ...
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Line 6, column 146, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... of money that would also help you grow in future. As you are technically very strong...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, so, whereas, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 845.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56756756757 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55878440825 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605405405405 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.0503468999 44.8134815571 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264839828977 0.216113520407 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103613323536 0.0766984524023 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619882532256 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154860167823 0.12726935374 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386606282579 0.0580467560999 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.