You recently stayed in a hotel on a business trip You later discovered that you had left somethings behind at the hotel Write a letter to the manager of the hotel In you letter Give details of your stay at the hotel Describe the things you left Say what y

Essay topics:

You recently stayed in a hotel on a business trip. You later discovered that you had left somethings behind at the hotel.

Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In you letter
- Give details of your stay at the hotel
- Describe the things you left
- Say what you want the manager to do

Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter about items that I left in my room during my business trip at your hotel from the 1st to the 2nd of Feb 2022.
I was attending a conference by the Construction Association, a 2-day event at your hotel. I also stayed on the 7th floor in room number 71.
While I am staying in the room, I remember leaving my pen and a book on hockey by K Dev in the bedside drawer. It is a big book with pictures of hockey players. The size is about 15 inches by 12 inches and looks like magazine. The pen is a regular pen but it has my initial “SS” on it.
Kindly check in the lost and found and hold it for me. I will be back to Mumbai next week and I will come to collect it myself.
Please call me to confirm that it is safe with you on 5556744440 and I am waiting for your call.
Thanking you.
Yours sincerely,
Suki Sangi

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter about items tha...
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Line 8, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... call. Thanking you. Yours sincerely, Suki Sangi
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 696.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.0 4.54256449028 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24905846333 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632183908046 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 202.5 290.88556701 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5839977161 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.2727272727 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8181818182 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.36363636364 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222344934829 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0690423424763 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.086208506732 0.0603063233224 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.096686703794 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0800401734507 0.0580467560999 138% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.3 8.37731958763 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 90.09 70.7449484536 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.62 8.71597938144 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.74 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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