You have recently noticed a lot of rubbish in the area where you live. You decided to complain about this.
Write a letter to the environmental officer. In your letter
• describe where the rubbish is coming from
• say what problems it is causing
• suggest what the environmental officer could do
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to draw your attention to the accumulation of rubbish in our neighbourhood. My name is K Singh and I have been a resident at 14 Ford Drive, Oakville located in Eastlake for over 20 years. This is my first letter as I never had a reason to write earlier.
However, it is nearly a month since the municipality workers have not picked up garbage in Eastlake and the inconvenience caused due to prolonged worker’s strike is concerning.
The rubbish around every street of Eastlake neighbourhood is overflowing. This has resulted in limiting the parking spaces on streets, the walkways have a rancid smell which is so unpleasant that the residents are driving to other neighbourhoods to walk their dogs. Furthermore, we can’t open our windows to enjoy the fresh air as filthy air makes living indoor also unbearable.
I think there are several things that can be done on priority basis to ease the situation. Firstly, assign workers to alternate garbage pickup between neighbourhood. Although this will reduce the regular frequency from weekly to bi-monthly, an instant solution considering the worker’s strike. Secondly, offer residents a possibility to drop off recyclable items at the community centre backyard which is currently large unused area in Eastlake.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon on this matter.
Yours faithfully,
K Singh
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter to draw your at...
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Line 3, column 163, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...caused due to prolonged worker’s strike is concerning. The rubbish around every street of E...
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Line 7, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...soon on this matter. Yours faithfully, K Singh
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, look, second, secondly, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1179.0 937.175257732 126% => OK
No of words: 228.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17105263158 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01943981135 2.54303337028 119% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 127.690721649 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.688596491228 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 357.3 290.88556701 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0023153521 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.6923076923 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5384615385 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07692307692 4.34317383033 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160983158098 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0531603272832 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515202973681 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0850593136421 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545065347695 0.0580467560999 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 8.37731958763 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 8.71597938144 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 41.2886597938 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.