You recently heard about some new jobs at a local department store. You would like to work there.
Write a letter to store manager of the department store. In your letter
- Explain how you heard about the job
- Describe the kind of job you would like to have
- Give details of your experience and qualifications
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am write this letter to apply for job at Chin-Chin China Department Store because I want to work in department store.
I see advertisement for job in Facebook. Actually I follow your page as I live close to the store and every week I buy from your store like fruits and Indian vegetables.
The Facebook post is for Driver and store cleaner. I want to apply for driver job because I know all the area in Scarborough, and I can do delivery for all the shop orders and pack the online order. I know the store timing is till 11.30pm and I am okay to work till shop closing time.
My driver licence is from Ontario and I am driving since 10 years. I have driving experience as I work for 3 years as Uber driver. Also, my record is very good, I have no accidents till today.
I am waiting for your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Jazz Patel
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, I am write this letter to apply for job ...
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Line 2, column 6, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'written'.
Suggestion: written
Dear Sir or Madam, I am write this letter to apply for job at Chin-Ch...
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Line 5, column 194, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y good, I have no accidents till today. I am waiting for your reply. Yours sinc...
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Line 7, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...aiting for your reply. Yours sincerely, Jazz Patel
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 695.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.26380368098 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39355024297 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 127.690721649 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564417177914 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 221.4 290.88556701 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.451953667 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.1818181818 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8181818182 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.63636363636 4.34317383033 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202857579738 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.07287128716 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717423111906 0.0603063233224 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121714107093 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0984413906572 0.0580467560999 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.0 8.37731958763 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.84 8.71597938144 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.