Some people say that the only way to learn a second language well is to live in a country where that language is spoken. What is your opinion about this?
It is believed by some people that to learn a second language proficiently one needs to live in a country where that language is spoken widely. In my opinion, it is imperative to learn a second language to live comfortably in another country/region. This essay will discuss further in the following paragraphs about the importance of learning a second language that is spoken in another country.
Firstly, there are several financial and social benefits of learning a native language of the country where one lives. If people choose to learn the local language well, it becomes easier to find well-paying jobs and get integrated into the society. For instance, when immigrants communicate in Arabic language in the Middle East, they may find it easier to find government jobs more easily than a person who can’t speak in Arabic. Furthermore, it becomes easier to socialize with the locals and live in harmony with Arabs. Therefore, learning a native language is important to live in another country.
Secondly, the ability to speak a second language that is native to the country where a person chooses to live can migrants to benefit from some facilities such as educational facilities. If individuals can learn that language, it can be a ticket to study in the regional university of that country. For instance, international students need to know German language well to study in the universities in Germany as the medium of instruction is in German. This can further provide a great understanding of that society. If people do not learn the regional language of the state they live, they would tend to like a stranger in that society. Thus, learning the native language in a particular country is a necessity.
In conclusion, learning the native language of a country is a difficult process and consumes time. In my opinion, learning a second language that is native to the place of residence is necessary to procure good jobs and social benefits for most expats. If educational institutes provide for budgets to discounted language learning classes, settlement process for new immigrants can be eased.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1766.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07471264368 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90217366294 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.439655172414 0.561755894193 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 576.0 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.897972894 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.882352941 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4705882353 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88235294118 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.438159040832 0.244688304435 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166288975753 0.084324248473 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109250300335 0.0667982634062 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.305518007371 0.151304729494 202% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126125562173 0.056905535591 222% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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