Some people say that the only way to learn a second language well is to live in a country where that language is spoken. What is your opinion about this?
It is believed by some people that to learn a second language proficiently one needs to live in a country where that language is spoken widely. In my opinion, it is imperative to learn a second language to live comfortably in another country/region. This essay will discuss further in the following paragraphs about the importance of learning a second language that is spoken in another country.
Firstly, there are several financial and social benefits of learning a native language of the country where one lives. If people choose to learn the local language well, it becomes easier to find well-paying jobs and get integrated into the society. For instance, when immigrants communicate in Arabic language in the Middle East, they may find it easier to find government jobs more easily than a person who can’t speak in Arabic. Furthermore, it becomes easier to socialize with the locals and live in harmony with Arabs. Therefore, learning a native language is important to live in another country.
Secondly, the ability to speak a second language that is native to the country where a person chooses to live can migrants to benefit from some facilities such as educational facilities. If individuals can learn that language, it can be a ticket to study in the regional university of that country. For instance, international students need to know German language well to study in the universities in Germany as the medium of instruction is in German. This can further provide a great understanding of that society. If people do not learn the regional language of the state they live, they would tend to like a stranger in that society. Thus, learning the native language in a particular country is a necessity.
In conclusion, learning the native language of a country is a difficult process and consumes time. In my opinion, learning a second language that is native to the place of residence is necessary to procure good jobs and social benefits for most expats. In addition, language usage can be useful to gain a sense of belongingness to the land one settles and hence learning it is essential. If countries that encourage foreign national to immigrate provides free language learning classes, then the settlement process for new immigrants can be easier.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1895.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 376.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03989361702 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88930054889 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.446808510638 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 617.4 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8931791417 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.277777778 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8888888889 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.88888888889 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.43668282967 0.244688304435 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16366413916 0.084324248473 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106578736125 0.0667982634062 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.310848450754 0.151304729494 205% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121892746607 0.056905535591 214% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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