You recently went to Australia for a holiday. However, your return flight was delayed
by a day.
Write a letter to the airline company. In your letter
• Introduce yourself.
• Complain about the delay
• Explain the problems that is caused you
• Ask for a letter of apology and/or some form of compensation.
say what you would like the manager to do
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter with regard to an unexpected delay in my return from Australia which took 24 hours and made me to stay an extra day. As I was there for spending some leisure time until 24th August, I was due to commence my job as an IT engineer the following day. Unfortunately this demeanor brings me nothing but inconvenience situation not a mere for me rather for my employer. Actually it also costs my job. Your airline brochure which motivated me to book from your company, indicated any delay on flights would be recompense respectfully. Given this fact that this foul-up occurred without any customers announcement was entirely the fault of your airline, I feel that a compensation in the form of a complimentary ticket of the same distance would be warranted. I can be contacted at the address supplied. Your assistance in this matter is greatly appreciated.
Your faithfully,
Chi Chung
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter with regard to ...
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Line 3, column 221, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g some leisure time until 24th August, I was due to commence my job as an IT eng...
^^
Line 3, column 233, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...re time until 24th August, I was due to commence my job as an IT engineer the fo...
^^
Line 3, column 254, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'an' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: an; IT
...gust, I was due to commence my job as an IT engineer the following day. Unfortunate...
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Line 3, column 260, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'engineers'?
Suggestion: engineers
...I was due to commence my job as an IT engineer the following day. Unfortunately this d...
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Line 3, column 623, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'customers'' or 'customer's'?
Suggestion: customers'; customer's
... that this foul-up occurred without any customers announcement was entirely the fault of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, so, i feel, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 775.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87421383648 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93917344778 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.698113207547 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.159633039 44.8134815571 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.1111111111 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 4.34317383033 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.29896907216 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203592265015 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0747363552885 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510576771212 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195300793176 0.12726935374 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0580467560999 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.