Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Language is Inseparable part of every country. According to some, as many languages are diminishing, it is more comfortable to be fewer languages. In my opinion, I disagree that vanishing languages are not important, as it will greatly has backwards for a country and the world.
A good reason to maintain all the types of languages is that keeping a language is next to keeping a culture. Since, a civilization gradually upgrade, by eliminating its language many aspect of costumes, idioms becoming vague. Furthermore, for instance, Iranian people have a traditional new year, which have been celebrated from approximately 5000 years ago. Therefore, if their language disappear, they could not have a good outlook of how and why their ancestors celebrated this day.
Another reason to value languages and do not erase them is that majority of people are interested to learn new languages. As many researches reveal learning and speaking multiple languages is beneficial to the mind while becoming. In the other word, by using languages people would counteract with some diseases like Alzheimer.
Finally, uniting languages in a limited range by eliminating them has a long time disadvantages for any civilization. As human would lose numerous previous books written in certain languages. People would not study them. Moreover, discovering and detecting new science and other fields would be unreachable. In addition, revolution of humanity in various fields such as medicine, engineering, designing, mathematic could be disrupted.
To conclude, as some people subscribe that communication is more convenient by eradicating several languages. I believe every society must protect its culture that language is an important part of it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 237, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...s are not important, as it will greatly has backwards for a country and the world. ...
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Line 3, column 181, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun aspect seems to be countable; consider using: 'many aspects'.
Suggestion: many aspects
...ly upgrade, by eliminating its language many aspect of costumes, idioms becoming vague. Fur...
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Line 7, column 119, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ime disadvantages for any civilization. As human would lose numerous previous book...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, while, for instance, in addition, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1479.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49814126394 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09693318451 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60594795539 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.3684360882 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.0 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8235294118 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64705882353 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293277850069 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0862229238744 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499467135244 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158087593266 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0622338967128 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.32 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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