You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows the process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The process demonstrates the way of how bricks are produced as a construction material.
From a simple recognition to provided information, it is apparent the main material of brick is clay. Also, the process entirely takes 9 stages to turn a clay to brick.
At the first stage in the process, the clay are collected by a digger. Next, a mixture of soil and clay are sifted in a roller to extract clay. after that it is contributed with sand and water to be shaped in moulds or be a brick by using wire cutter.
All the bricks in a huge group must be dried between 24 to 48 hours and after that they are kept in a special oven called kiln. There are two type of kilns. The first one have a moderate temperature between 200’C to 980C and the second kiln have is higher than previous with 870C to 1300C to make the clay harder. This process is followed by cooling down the finished bricks for 48 to 72 hours in a cooling chamber. after all the bricks have cooled down the get packaged and transmit to final destination by delivery trucks.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 39, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... At the first stage in the process, the clay are collected by a digger. Next, a...
^^
Line 9, column 59, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... in the process, the clay are collected by a digger. Next, a mixture of soil and...
^^
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: After
...are sifted in a roller to extract clay. after that it is contributed with sand and wa...
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Line 13, column 423, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: After
...r 48 to 72 hours in a cooling chamber. after all the bricks have cooled down the get...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, after all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 863.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44845360825 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48133108077 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577319587629 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.2983011504 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.4545454545 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6363636364 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.90909090909 5.23603664747 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103757443597 0.215688989381 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0414458493532 0.103423049105 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0330310633577 0.0843802449381 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0672774464442 0.15604864568 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0210296643839 0.0819641961636 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.2329268293 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 61.2550243902 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.23 11.4140731707 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.