A large company in your area has decided to spend a certain amount of money, either to sponsor a local children’s sports team for two years, or to pay for two open-air concerts. It has asked for feedback from the general public.
Write a letter to the company. In your letter
describe the benefits of sponsoring the sports team
summarise the benefits of paying for the concerts
say how you think the company should spend the money
Dear Sir or Madam,
I hope this letter finds you well. Since I had read on local magazine to send your opinions about subsidising Blue sport team or open-air concerts, I decided to pursue you around investing on our local children's sports team.
Let me explain you in details. It has been about for years that local children are getting ready for country competition. Thanks to families supports, they really have been successful in their team and they rewards 2 awards in middle east cities champion.Unfortunately, As lack of a professional trainer, their talents wouldn't be thrive . besides that, they really needs a good place to train themselves.
however, owning two concerts costs which are running in outdoor places, bring for all the local people happiness and exciting moments. you should consider that paying for concerts extend your bank account.
Honestly, despite of this fact executing concerts is more producing money in short term, subsiding the local sport team has enormous benefits and effective outputs in long term which even cause you to take a sponsorship in big sport teams in area. Your assistance in this matter is greatly appreciated.
Faithfully,
Chi Chung
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Unfortunately
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...term, subsiding the local sport team has enormous benefits and effective outputs ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, honestly, however, really, so, well, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1007.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21761658031 4.54256449028 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82540063063 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.725388601036 0.622605031667 117% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.5593113507 44.8134815571 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5454545455 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5454545455 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90909090909 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25700919963 0.216113520407 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0787613275552 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0789680490568 0.0603063233224 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144777446259 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448517984756 0.0580467560999 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 8.37731958763 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 8.71597938144 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.