You organized a party for a 90th birthday party in a hotel for a relative; many elderly guests attended this party which is of great success.
Write a letter to thank the hotel manager. In your letter
give the details of the party
the reason why the party was so successful
mention things that helped you a lot/good service provided by the staff of the hotel
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir or Madam,
Dear Sir or Madam,
i’m writing this letter regard to a birthday party which I held at your fascinating restaurant. As I was going to go 30 years old, I planned to invite some of my close-knit to a meal and I chose your restaurant, Since I heard about it a lot. Lavishly , i’m quietly satisfy with all the services and food . Upon arrival I was mused with your interior decoration, Furthermore, I completely have been surprised by your special room including all those properties like balloons, the birthday cake and etc. Beside, I really saw all the waitress behavior entirely respectful.
The interesting point wich I care about to choose a restaurant was that All the foods ingredients was so fresh and the tasting of main courses was marvelous specially sea foods.
To elucidate,I want to appreciate from your fantastic restaurant to make a special occasion not a mere for me, but for all my friends. I look forward to seeing you in your esteemed restaurant.
With faithfully,
Chi Chung
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, i'm writing this letter regard to a...
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Suggestion: ,
..., Since I heard about it a lot. Lavishly , i'm quietly satisfy with all the s...
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Suggestion: .
...y satisfy with all the services and food . Upon arrival I was mused with your inte...
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Line 5, column 517, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...erties like balloons, the birthday cake and etc. Beside, I really saw all the waitress b...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...aitress behavior entirely respectful. The interesting point wich I care about ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
...s specially sea foods. To elucidate,I want to appreciate from your fantastic ...
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Line 15, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g you in your esteemed restaurant. With faithfully, Chi Chung
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, look, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 866.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06432748538 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89835835236 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.695906432749 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.6280351305 44.8134815571 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2222222222 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77777777778 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154139649122 0.216113520407 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0551503845151 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613215211978 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.095139316203 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363430305336 0.0580467560999 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 8.37731958763 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 8.71597938144 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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