You organized a party for a 90th birthday party in a hotel for a relative; many elderly guests attended this party which is of great success.
Write a letter to thank the hotel manager. In your letter
give the details of the party
the reason why the party was so successful
mention things that helped you a lot/good service provided by the staff of the hotel
Dear Sir,
I am writing in reference to pay my sincere gratitude in regards to a birthday party which I had organized in your hotel last Saturday from 6pm to 10 pm for my uncle. The party was held in the Radisson lounge with a gathering of nearly seventy people and was a huge success.
Although there were many reasons for this party to be successful however the pivotal reason being the arrangement done by your staff and the quality of food. To elucidate the party lounge had a good ambience too which was further enhanced by the panoramic view of lake which is quite visible from the alfresco part of the lounge. Additionally the food served was delicious especially the Thai cuisine as majority of the guests said that the food was able to satisfy their taste buds.
Lastly I would like to mention a word of thanks to your staff who were professional in handling all the requests from the elderly guests especially the service was pretty fast as we didn’t had to wait for long period while ordering food items.
Yours sincerely
Saud
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... seventy people and was a huge success. Although there were many reasons for thi...
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...e from the alfresco part of the lounge. Additionally the food served was delicious especiall...
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...d was able to satisfy their taste buds. Lastly I would like to mention a word of...
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...dering food items. Yours sincerely Saud
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...ood items. Yours sincerely Saud
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, lastly, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 32.9175257732 39% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 880.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7311827957 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45072257933 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.639784946237 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.255548478 44.8134815571 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.714285714 76.5299724578 164% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5714285714 16.8248392259 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.71428571429 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323816793966 0.216113520407 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133133449658 0.0766984524023 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695689943134 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204383464996 0.12726935374 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0783566394199 0.0580467560999 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 8.37731958763 168% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 70.7449484536 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 7.45979381443 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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