Some people say the economic growth is the only way to end hunger and poverty, while others say that economic growth is damaging the environment so it must be stopped. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
there are some arguments that the solo way for eradicating famine and poverty is to grow economic. However, others contend economic growth should be stopped due its damage for environment. I strongly agree with the view that it is harmful for any fauna and it will damage the planet too and there are other ways to eliminate hungry people.
On the one hand, people who contend merely upgrading economic situation will increase livelihood have a good reason for their claim and that is the economic progressing will increase the amount of jobs, in the other words, the more jobs, the more employees. therefore, obviously by declining the amount of unemployed persons, starving people will disappears as poverty. there are many countries such as USA that try to preserve its increased economic growth rate to minimize the amount of poor people.
On the other hand, some people believe by expanding manufactures in terms of rising economic situation, the vulnerable environment will absolutely damage and the consequences could not be repaired. Firstly, since constructing a strong economic position, undoubtedly, needs more places and grounds to expand its companies, departments and also accommodations for the workforce. there will be more jungles and forests which are sacrificed for increasing a country’s input. In the other word, more fauna and habitats are being destroyed due to grow economic. such as many developing countries like Iran where the amount of faunas are sharply declined.
Secondly, fumes as a result of increasing enormous companies will also be harmful for the air and by rising contaminant participles the speed of global warming increase too. therefore, the consequences for planets will appear. For instance, melting plural ices. it seems there should be another ways to counteract poverty. For example, by increasing wealthy people fees and deploy the money to poor people or to subsidize different kind of services such as foods or cure services to increase their level of life.
To conclude, while some people believe developing economic prospects will bring social mobility, others concern about the subsequences of this issue for environment which is undeniable and I agree with the second view as conserving environment is next to poverty issue.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
there are some arguments that the solo way fo...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 259, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Therefore
...rds, the more jobs, the more employees. therefore, obviously by declining the amount of u...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 348, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'disappear'
Suggestion: disappear
...nemployed persons, starving people will disappears as poverty. there are many countries su...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 371, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
...ving people will disappears as poverty. there are many countries such as USA that try...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 378, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
... also accommodations for the workforce. there will be more jungles and forests which ...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 562, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Such
...e being destroyed due to grow economic. such as many developing countries like Iran ...
^^^^
Line 13, column 175, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Therefore
...e speed of global warming increase too. therefore, the consequences for planets will appe...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 263, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...ear. For instance, melting plural ices. it seems there should be another ways to c...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, kind of, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1941.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36187845304 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8183362359 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516574585635 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 610.2 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.7149075749 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.176470588 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2941176471 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.82352941176 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211523926444 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0739312823768 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626858640557 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135912306194 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452595308588 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.