Dear Neha,
Last evening i came to attend your concert it was such a delight to watch you sing on the stage live.i still could not believe my eyes that i saw you so close to me.
I cannot forget the moment when you started of singing one of my favorite songs from your collection of songs. That song inspires me alot as this song has its own raw story which describes a journey of a women and her empowerment.
As i have a keen interest in music as a subject too.I have been into learning music since i was two . I really will be obliged if you could ever help me with the usage of piano in singing . As i have been looking forward for your reply soon.
Regards,
Avni
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 14, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
Dear Neha, Last evening i came to attend your concert it was such...
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Line 3, column 102, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ght to watch you sing on the stage live.i still could not believe my eyes that i ...
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Line 3, column 141, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
....i still could not believe my eyes that i saw you so close to me. I cannot fo...
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Line 5, column 205, Rule ID: WOMAN_WOMEN[1]
Message: 'woman' is the singular form of 'women'. Consider using 'woman'?
Suggestion: woman
...aw story which describes a journey of a women and her empowerment. As i have a kee...
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Line 7, column 53, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...keen interest in music as a subject too.I have been into learning music since i w...
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Line 7, column 100, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...been into learning music since i was two . I really will be obliged if you could e...
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Line 7, column 188, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...lp me with the usage of piano in singing . As i have been looking forward for your...
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Line 10, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d for your reply soon. Regards, Avni
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, really, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 549.0 937.175257732 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 131.0 206.0 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.19083969466 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.38312328216 3.78020617076 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.12219293802 2.54303337028 83% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 127.690721649 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.717557251908 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 170.1 290.88556701 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.4793244379 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8333333333 16.8248392259 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 4.34317383033 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191310190691 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0740313397765 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671676662955 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130807417164 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480511608233 0.0580467560999 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 70.7449484536 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.02 8.71597938144 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.85 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 18.0 41.2886597938 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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