Respected sir,
This epistle is written to you to inform you regarding the employment opportunities your agency can provide me regarding a part time job into teaching . As i have served in Chandigarh university as an assistant professor specialization in business communication and communication skills i will be the apt person to withhold any potion relating to it.
As a mentor and trainer i have learned to handle the strength of students of at least 120 students per class. regardless of the fact that i am probably had just finished with my post graduation the time i was provided with this opportunity.
i would be glad if you been able to hire me for nay teaching job as i am a quick leaner, grabs students attention and my sessions are made more interesting through demonstrating things to make the session more interactive and not only one sided.
hope to hear from you soon with a positive response.
Regards,
Avni
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 124, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
... your agency can provide me regarding a part time job into teaching . As i have served in...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 151, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... regarding a part time job into teaching . As i have served in Chandigarh universi...
^^
Line 3, column 236, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...as an assistant professor specialization in business communication and communicat...
^^
Line 3, column 289, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... communication and communication skills i will be the apt person to withhold any ...
^
Line 5, column 77, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ed to handle the strength of students of at least 120 students per class. regardl...
^^
Line 5, column 112, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Regardless
...ts of at least 120 students per class. regardless of the fact that i am probably had just...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 140, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... per class. regardless of the fact that i am probably had just finished with my p...
^
Line 5, column 205, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...nished with my post graduation the time i was provided with this opportunity. ...
^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: I
... was provided with this opportunity. i would be glad if you been able to hire ...
^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... was provided with this opportunity. i would be glad if you been able to hire ...
^
Line 7, column 69, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...able to hire me for nay teaching job as i am a quick leaner, grabs students atten...
^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hope
... interactive and not only one sided. hope to hear from you soon with a positive r...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, so, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 782.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91823899371 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02489669245 2.54303337028 119% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.698113207547 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.0023128895 44.8134815571 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.333333333 76.5299724578 170% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 16.8248392259 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 4.34317383033 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 2.54639175258 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217775675215 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0783244549309 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0777727363599 0.0603063233224 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1160214227 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0712882125229 0.0580467560999 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 8.37731958763 179% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 70.7449484536 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 7.45979381443 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 8.71597938144 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.