You recently went to a public event (for example an exhibition, festival, or show) that you think your friend would enjoy. Write a letter to friend. In your letter
• tell your friend what the event was
• explain why you think your friend would like the event
• invite them to come to the event with you
Dear Eva,
I hope you and your family is doing great. I am writing to tell you about the most exciting concert I attended last weekend and I am really eager to invite you to the same. Let me explain you further. It was the music concert by one of our favorite singer named Sanam organized in JNU campus Delhi.
Moreover, you would be amazed to know that I booked the front row seat and was able to see him clearly, as well as enjoyed each of his songs. In the event I also got the chance to shake hand with him. Though it was not possible for those sitting in second row. I know that he is the singer, who is close to your heart and you were desperately waiting for this event to get organized in our city. So, here is the chance for you to enjoy to the fullest.
Also, another important information is that, you still have the chance to attend this concert. The commencement of the concert is on weekend the 3rd July. It has been long that you waited for him. Besides, I have VIP pass available with me, so you do not have to worry about the entrance fee. We can go together to attend his passionate event and have gala time as we used to have in childhood. Not only we can enjoy but also can share our experience with our friends.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours loving
Urvashi
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, look, moreover, really, second, so, still, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 32.9175257732 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1066.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 251.0 206.0 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.24701195219 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15739902789 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 127.690721649 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585657370518 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 335.7 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8177818243 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.7058823529 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7647058824 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64705882353 4.34317383033 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24844221764 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0827081950882 0.0766984524023 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528353389393 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141854266058 0.12726935374 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0643187669252 0.0580467560999 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.0 8.37731958763 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.78 8.71597938144 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.66 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.