You rented a car from Car Rental Company. The air conditioner has stopped working. You phoned the company a week ago but it still has not been repaired.
Write a letter to the company. In your letter
– introduce yourself
– explain the situation
– say what action you would like the company to take
Dear Sir,
I am writing to express my dissatification over the type of service I have received from your company. Despite logging complaint on your call centre, my problem was not resolved and hence writing this letter for quick resolution.
My name is Saleem and I am employee of SCB. On July 1st, I rented out corolla GLI number ABC123 from your company for my official trip to interior part of the province.
As you might aware that the weather in the part of areas I intend to visit is quite warm during July, therefore I opted to rent 1300 CC car. While going to Hyderabad, the car's AC broken down. You can imagine how difficult it became to cope up in the scorching heat. Immidiatly, I called the company's number to get it fixed but even after a week, my compaint status is still opened.
I would request you to kindly exchange the existing car with some other car whose AC is in working condition as I have to proceed with the trip. I am currently in Hyderaba and can be contacted on email or cell number which is already in your records.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully
Saleem
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 137, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'car' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'cars'.
Suggestion: cars
...July, therefore I opted to rent 1300 CC car. While going to Hyderabad, the cars AC ...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...er which is already in your records. I look forward to hearing from you soon. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, look, so, still, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 928.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52682926829 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44270941135 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663414634146 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0963468233 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.3333333333 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0833333333 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.08333333333 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226135724221 0.216113520407 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0703878007485 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0338539092373 0.0603063233224 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110686998193 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0278234731789 0.0580467560999 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.