IELTS writing sample: The school library is seeking applicants for a job over summer break. Write a letter to the library’s manager, in your letter include:
– A brief introduction of yourself
– Your experience and relevant skills
– Why you want the job
My name is Saleem and I am 3rd year student at ABC University. I recently saw a job post on notice board related to the the job in library hence writing you to express my interest in the same.
While I was completing my 1st year at University, I had a chance to work in the local library for few weeks. During my tenure, I assisted the Chief librarian in maintaining database of the students and the books they had issued. In order to accomplish the other task in library, I also created a software with the help of IT which is still being used.
Considering my recent experience and financial conditions, it would be great if I can get this job as this will not only help me in future career but also enable me to settle my education loans.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully
Saleem
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 117, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...w a job post on notice board related to the the job in library hence writing you to exp...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 117, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...w a job post on notice board related to the the job in library hence writing you to exp...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, so, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 671.0 937.175257732 72% => OK
No of words: 152.0 206.0 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41447368421 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55425036842 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 127.690721649 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.671052631579 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 210.6 290.88556701 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7270480503 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.875 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 4.34317383033 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109894098504 0.216113520407 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0498199481355 0.0766984524023 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548225819174 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.055456054116 0.12726935374 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371645998543 0.0580467560999 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.3 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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