You share a parking area with several neighbours and have recently started having problems.Write a letter to be copied to all neighbours that share the parking area. In that letter• explaining the problems• suggesting ways to help the situation• pro

Essay topics:

You share a parking area with several neighbours and have recently started having problems.

Write a letter to be copied to all neighbours that share the parking area. In that letter

• explaining the problems
• suggesting ways to help the situation
• proposing a possible meeting

Dear Neighbours,

I am writing to draw your attention toward the parking problem. Since few week I am facing issue of road blockage due to wrong parking. Several time issue has been addressed to the person who park car in wrong parking area but no vain.

We have parking policy for our society, despite that some people are not following the instructions. We should put some sigh board about no parking.therefore we can solve the problem of wrong parking to some extent. In addition separate parking facility should be provide to friends and relative who visit their dear ones in our society.

Another solution for this problem is It would be great if we set up a meeting to share about concern and complaints. Many people are new in the society so that could be a reason they are not familiar with the parking policy and park their vehicle
where the space available.In this we can meet with the new attendant of our society.

Looking forward to hear from you all as earliest as possible.

Your faithfully

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 65, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...r attention toward the parking problem. Since few week I am facing issue of road bloc...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 71, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun week seems to be countable; consider using: 'few weeks'.
Suggestion: few weeks
...ntion toward the parking problem. Since few week I am facing issue of road blockage due ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 220, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...lem of wrong parking to some extent. In addition extra parking facility should be provid...
^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 262, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'provided'?
Suggestion: provided
...dition extra parking facility should be provide to friends and people who visit their d...
^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 247, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he parking policy and park their vehicle where the space available. Looking fo...
^^^^
Line 11, column 17, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...the space available. Looking forward to hear from you all as earliest as possible. ...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, therefore, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 796.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79518072289 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52187411159 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668674698795 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8678721925 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4444444444 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4444444444 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55555555556 4.34317383033 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204581972995 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0723168846869 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470168550759 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0905081642842 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0551514127241 0.0580467560999 95% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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