An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problems does this cause? What solutions can you suggest to deal with situation?
Several reason support this arguments that doctors and teachers nad other professionals leaving their own poor countries to work in developed country. numbers of factor are their which play integral part in people decision to move in other nation. Fair amount of people believe, life in developed country are better.
over populated countries are one of the cause for people preference for another county. For example india is second highest populated country so are the competition for education, jobs, travel, food, earning is high. If there is opening of 100 job vacancies, over million people apply for the same. Value of people life are very less. In 2013 the deadest flood disaster in history happened in india. people over thousands are still missing and above 10,000 people were reported dead. furthermore traveling another big factor in this argument, many of people in metropolitan cites travel by trains in their daily life routine. To embark on another factor why professionals are more influent to migrat everyday they fight to catch and train and sometime they miss due to overload. to developed countries are also consider as a status symbol or passion for earning a good amount of people. jobs should be introduced, In india retirement age is 60 years, however this should be reduce to 50. In this way more young people can get employment. also the
education system should be less for poor states. medication should be less expensive, in today life style people are getting ill with major education system should be less expensive and should be free for poor states. medication should be less expensive, in today life style people are getting ill with major disease especially the class living in poverty and below poverty line.Thse are the some aspect which I believe government should pay more attention to keep their people happy in their own country.On the basis of above statement, I would say government should impose less tax on food, medication and education system and try to introduce more jobs to people. however individual preference vary.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, second, so, still, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1735.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10294117647 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52100346638 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538235294118 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 89.9394171953 49.4020404114 182% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.3888888889 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8888888889 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.44444444444 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100847005729 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0371226562833 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049729102265 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0949436192124 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.069795281755 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.