Many high-level positions in companies are filled by men even though the workforce in many developed countries is more than 50 per cent female. Companies should be required to allocate a certain percentage of these positions to women.To what extent do you

Essay topics:

Many high-level positions in companies are filled by men even though the workforce in many developed countries is more than 50 per cent female. Companies should be required to allocate a certain percentage of these positions to women.

To what extent do you agree?

In India, a large number of multitude are working in multi-national companies. Despite the fact, a fair amount of company hires male staff more as compare to female staff. India is a nation who believes in equality. Therefore I strongly agree with the statement that companies should allocate a certain percentage to women for several reasons.

In the argument, Women are equally hard-working, well-educated and in addition, they are enough capable to handle any task. For example, in German companies more female staff are hired reason being, they believe that women are a more faithful resource to an organization and lifetime commitment can be expected. Other than that their potential to manage work and life is commendable.

Another factor which I personally believe why women should be hired on a management role is their patience level and thus they can be a good mentor. For example, many individuals consider, a good manager is one who has more patience and ability to understand circumstances.

To sum up all, IT is a better idea to hire more female resources in companies if we are tend to provide more comfortable and managed the environment to youth to work please fully in any organization

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
In India, a large number of multitude are working in multi-national...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 145, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...amount of company hires male staff more as compare to female staff. India is a nat...
^^
Line 1, column 217, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...a is a nation who believes in equality. Therefore I strongly agree with the statement tha...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 89, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'tended'.
Suggestion: tended
...female resources in companies if we are tend to provide more comfortable and managed...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, in addition, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1015.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 200.0 315.596192385 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.075 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94023383424 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 342.9 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2238287308 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.5 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173282049847 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.063838401295 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052177725711 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102690806462 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0223258347488 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

---------------------
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.