Some people assert that history has little value in the contemporary world. But some believe that history is needed today to learn from the past.
Discuss both viewpoints and give your opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
History is a very interesting topic to discuss about. Some people think history has no value but i personally believe that history is very import as compare with future. It gives us lots of experiences and knowledge about our past, which is really helpful for our development.
First of all i would like to discuss about those people who thinks history has very little value. They believe governments wasting there time and money on historical buildings and monuments but they don't know lot's of people including them wants to travel around the world on different places and if there are no historical buildings or historical places then what would they see. In my opinion and most of the people thinks history is an important subject for kids also with the help of history kids can learn about there ethnicity, culture and country in which they are living. They need to learn about there country history how many brave people lived in there country how they served there country, basically these kind of things given them idea of solidarity.
History is also playing very part in tourist places for example most of the European countries are tourist places because of there different culture and there historical buildings which are still in operations, People always wants live like kings and generals. lastly the most important impact of history is on the countries. In modern era every country has defending army with latest equipment's the question is how they build strong army and ammunition, They have learned from there history and the history gives them boost to protect there country. In a nutshell history is very important for us to learn thing from the past.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, lastly, really, so, still, then, for example, kind of, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1395.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94680851064 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37684166257 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507092198582 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.718712979 49.4020404114 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.818181818 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6363636364 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.45454545455 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256765235312 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117425527136 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544003906611 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193774351188 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0285419274209 0.056905535591 50% => OK
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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