You should spend about 20 minutes on this task Your neighbors have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house flat Write a letter to your neighbors In your letter explain the reasons for the noise Apologize describe what action yo

Essay topics:

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Your neighbors have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat.
Write a letter to your neighbors. In your letter.
-explain the reasons for the noise.
-Apologize.
-describe what action you will take.

Dear neighbors,

I am writing concerning your complaint about all the disturbance I have caused to you. I live next to your door, number six. Having faced terrible and awkward problems need to be fixed. Also, I have considered finishing as soon as I can.

Moreover, this apartment was made with many inaccuracies. The main pipe conducted to the sink has a huge hole, likewise, the toilet does not flush at all and makes a disturbing noise during the nights. Therefore, they require complex repair and maintenance. For that reason, I hired two plumbers to make the repair work to give a fair solution to this issue. I am aware you are disappointed with me. However, I know you have been nice people, that is why I would not like to continue depriving you of your privacy.

In addition, I ought to apologize for all the inconvenience. Every morning there is a disaster with all the noise you may have to stand, and I am ashamed for that.

On the other hand, I am eager to reschedule the forthcoming plumbing tasks next weekend. I think this is the best action to could carry out. I will look into the matter. Furthermore, I would be most grateful if you could reply at your earliest convenience so that I could know your point of view.

I look forward to hearing from you,

Yours faithfully,

Votes
Average: 8.9 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, likewise, look, may, moreover, so, therefore, i think, in addition, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1076.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 232.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63793103448 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68434489049 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 127.690721649 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633620689655 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 330.3 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.13402061856 175% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.1961768758 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.2941176471 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6470588235 16.8248392259 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88235294118 4.34317383033 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.49484536082 468% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30657846166 0.216113520407 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0822395796791 0.0766984524023 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732988163755 0.0603063233224 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148825047526 0.12726935374 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383767454439 0.0580467560999 66% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.04 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.