Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holidays.
Write a letter to your friends. In your letter.
-thank them for the photos and for the holidays.
-explain why you didn’t write earlier.
-invite them to come and stay with you.
Hello Kathy and Nathalie,
I hope you are doing very well. It was amazing to see you and have a great time together last month. I feel very grateful because you shared your room with me. I remember that morning trying to get the ticket for the Rock Concert. We had so much fun.
Besides, I was surprised by the pictures you sent to me. I want to thank you both for these precious memories. Indeed, I liked the album. In addition, I could have never imagined such holidays in Malibu. You have an environmentally friendly place to be enjoyed. Also, do you remember when we finally won the race cars? The other team was upset because they failed.
On the other hand, I want to apologize because I never replied soon. There was a delay during the journey. The weather was awful, and we had to make a stop in Madrid, Spain. I got home late in the night, and I was tired. I hope you can forgive me for writing to you at this time., I needed to recover from long hours of travel.
To conclude, I want to invite you to my house next month. You have to stay with me without hesitation. I am planning to visit Halloween Park and to get some scary customs. I am looking forward to seeing you soon.
Best wishes,
Naile.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, look, so, well, i feel, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 997.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 230.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.3347826087 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29250855247 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617391304348 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 313.2 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.13402061856 197% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 12.6804123711 173% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 16.3608247423 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 18.6534843753 44.8134815571 42% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 45.3181818182 76.5299724578 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.4545454545 16.8248392259 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.54545454545 4.34317383033 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 7.41237113402 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34239649737 0.216113520407 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0830490995937 0.0766984524023 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694686319838 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163440043635 0.12726935374 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0941192721925 0.0580467560999 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.2 8.37731958763 50% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.25 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.35 8.71597938144 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 8.62886597938 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 8.54432989691 70% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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